This is a portfolio that contains the work that I (Graham Godwin) have put together during my time as a journalist at Carlmont. Please enjoy ! :)
Tuesday, December 17, 2013
EPA students may be allowed to attend schools closer
In a plan being considered by the Sequoia Union High School District, all East Palo Alto students will be given the same opportunity to attend Menlo-Atherton High School and no longer be forced to go Carlmont.
The proposed plan would take all of the graduates from the Ravenswood City School District and route them all to the same high school. Ravenswood students are currently assigned to three different district high schools, depending on where they live - Carlmont, Woodside and Menlo-Atherton.
While discussions are still in the preliminary stages and a new boundary map will not be put into place before the 2014-2015 school year, district Superintendent James Lianides said Friday that on Sept. 25 the school board considered letting any Ravenswood City School District graduate who wants to go to Menlo-Atherton High next fall to do so.
The district also held community meetings in May to discuss the potential changes, and how they would affect both students and the community. Officials sought guidance on facilities planning for the district, which anticipates a growth of 20 percent in the next decade. Current enrollment is 9,247.
“The message that came back clearly as the number one priority from all those meetings was the need to strengthen connections between any given eighth-grade graduating class and, if possible, a single high school where the students would go,” said Sequoia Trustee Alan Sarver of Belmont.
Sarver indicated that the district plans to keep the popular open-enrollment program, which gives families the opportunity to apply for a school other than the one to which they were initially assigned. On a typical year the District usually gets about 700 of those requests, and approved “upwards of 500 of those,” he said.
In the past, the open enrollment program has been used often by Ravenswood families, with 60 percent of East Palo Alto students already attending Menlo-Atherton.
Repositioning of students started in the 1980s, after East Palo Alto’s high school closed because of declining enrollment and deteriorating facilities. Since then, district officials decided to distribute Ravenswood graduates among the four high schools.
The proposed move would end the long daily journey that students make on a daily basis. In July, the Bay Area chapter of the Lawyer’s Committee for Civil Rights released an analysis saying that the District’s assignment system fails East Palo Alto students, who are suffering physically, socially and emotionally for having to commute long distances in order to get to school.
During the Sept. 25 meeting, the board also considered altering the boundaries for middle schools, in order to allow all students attending Tierra Linda Middle School in San Carlos to move onto Carlmont. About two-thirds already do, said Lianides.
All of these new proposed attendance boundaries could be critical for the future of the Sequoia district, as it is projected to be responsible for upwards of 10,000 students in 2020.
Lianides also said the board may pursue a facilities construction bond next June to add classrooms and facilities to the District’s high school campuses and possibly build one or two specialized high schools for students in need.
It remains to be seen if any of these proposed moves come to fruition, but it is clear that the district is striving to make decisions with it’s student’s best interests in mind.
http://issuu.com/scotscoop/docs/full_issue_september
Luke Horst - What life seems to be like on this side of the pond
Imagine packing up and leaving everything behind, taking your established life in a place you’ve lived your entire life and saying good bye.
Meet Carlmont junior, Luke Horst. Aug. 11 of this past summer, he left his home of Egham, England and moved to San Carlos. Horst moved from England to come live with his dad in California. “The most difficult thing I’ve ever had to do. Left all my friends and my old way of life.”
Coming from Egham to San Carlos is a massive change in itself. Both are located on a commuter belts to larger cities, London and San Francisco respectively, but that’s where the similarities stop.
Egham is a small English village, about a quarter of the size of San Carlos with a main street and a few residential areas. Horst described it as, “A quiet place with lots of places to eat. Having a college right next to Egham attracts a lot of teenagers to the area.” One huge difference is the Bay Area climate, which Horst gave high praise, “I appreciate this good warm weather after living in a miserable damp climate 24/7.”
Horst listed off the general adjustments that he’s had to make in his short time in America, “What people do for fun here, the massively different food, and the fact that people drive on the wrong side of the road.”
Perhaps the biggest adjustment Horst has had to make is acclimating to the bustling academic life that comes with being a junior in an American high school. Horst is enrolled in everything mandatory for a junior plus biotech and a online Modern European history class.
Being thrown right into the storm that is junior year, Horst has had to adjust to the tolling workload, “The schoolwork here is four times what I did in England, but here its absolutely essential to graduate. In England, you can get away with passing the one and only exam at the end of the year.”
Horst had been to two schools through his high school period back in England, one private and one public, and both required uniforms.
“The private school was very strict, but the state school I attended was much more relaxed and work could be done without struggle,” said Horst.
Socially, Horst has also had an adjustment. “I had a real life over there, so its really hard to leave that and have to start from scratch,” he said.
Although he does feel like he has become close friends with a few people, overall he feels like he is not fully settled yet. Horst said that for the most part teenagers in America are easier to get along with and generally more laid back.
When asked what Horst did for fun in his old home, “Partying is up there, people like to have a good time, but generally just hanging out and having a good time with friends.”
In coming to America, Horst also had to abandon his spot in the Aldershot Town Football Club’s youth academy. “I had a spot in the academy. We would play prestigious teams such as Arsenal, and travel as far as places such as the Netherlands and Spain.”
Horst was also an avid supporter of the London based club, Tottenham Hotspur. “I still follow Tottenham here in the United States, but I’ve also started to watch a bit of American football.”
Horst explained that his new found allegiance lie with Tom Brady and the New England Patriots, “mostly because they have England in their name.”
Horst also explained his interest in playing soccer for the men’s soccer team here at Carlmont, and has attended numerous off-season workouts.
“So far things in America and Carlmont have been unpredictable, but I’m looking forward to staying the course and growing as a person in my new home.”
http://issuu.com/scotscoop/docs/full_issue_oct
http://issuu.com/scotscoop/docs/full_issue_oct
Thursday, June 6, 2013
The golden age of Bay Area sports
49ers
coach Jim Harbaugh made famous the rally cry, “Who’s got it better than
us?” and the team would always reply, “NOOOOOBODY.”
These
days, the entire Bay Area can answer coach Harbaugh with the same
response when it comes to sports success. Bay Area sports teams are
riding a wave of success, winning and revival rarely seen by one region
of the country at the same time.
This extraordinary and surprising success by almost all of our teams of has fans rejuvenated, and hungry for more.
The
San Francisco Giants paved the way for Bay Area sports, winning an
improbable two World Series is three years. Both times, the Giants
defied the experts and pundits all the way to hoisting the trophy.
The
Giants are not done yet either, their shutdown rotation remains intact
for at least another year and MVP Buster Posey isn’t going anywhere
anytime soon. Expect another season of winning from AT&T park.
Ever since Jim Harbaugh has taken over the 49ers they have enjoyed a record of 27–9-1, reached back to back NFC championships, and were within 5 yards of a Super Bowl.
Harbaugh
instilled a swagger that ignited a winner attitude for a team that is
still largely composed of players who didn’t enjoy much success before
he arrived.
The
Niners also have a bright future, they are led by a swashbuckling
quarterback by the name of Colin Kaepernick. Kaepernick, whose hometown
is Turlock, CA, was embraced by fans all around the bay and if all goes
well should be the face of the franchise for the next decade.
Optimism
also springs from off the field too, the Niners are currently on pace
to play their games in a brand new stadium in Santa Clara. This new
modern stadium will be a massive upgrade over the deteriorated
Candlestick Park.
Bay
Area teams are not only winning over fans with victories and first
place finishes, they are giving them world class venues to watch the
games from. A renaissance of Bay Area stadiums and ballparks AT&T
Park, home of the Giants has been immediately topped the list of finest
ballparks in the country when it opened in 12 years ago. It is sold out
every night and is a “must see” for visitors and baseball fans from
around the world. In recent years both Cal and Stanford have modernized
and turned crusty old stadiums into state of the arc facilities for
players and fans.
Not
to be outdone, the Warriors and Forty Niners will open brand new
facilities in the next few years, both massive upgrades to the
deteriorated Candlestick Park and Oracle Arena.
Can
we expect this success to continue for years to come? History says no.
Only a New York, Detroit, Pittsburgh and Los Angeles have ever seen two
major league teams win championships in the same year. Philadelphia had 4
teams in championship games in 1980, with only the Philly’s winning in
baseball. San Francisco has seen success like this before with the
49er’s winning the Super Bowl back to back in ‘89 and ‘90, and between
those wins the A’s beat the Giants to win the ‘89 World Series.
The
Bay Area is undergoing a period of athletic revival. Never before have
our sports teams been this good all at the same time. Sure our parents
can go on and on about the Niner glory days, but we are living through a
period unmatched in Bay Area history and we should count ourselves
lucky.
Sadly not every team is catching the winning wave. The Raiders remain the most dysfunctional team in the NFL, leading in futility and failure. Just this week they announced that they will tarp over ten thousand seats, to make the decrepit stadium look less empty. The Raiders have not had a winning record in ten years and the future is not bright, thankfully less people will be able to see it.
College admissions process can be ruthless
The
proverbial “skinny” or “fat” letters are starting to arrive in
mailboxes, signaling the answer to the long awaited questions, “where’d
you get in?”
Students now know if they have been accepted, rejected or waitlisted to the colleges of their dreams.
When
the answers flow in, people naturally want to broadcast the results to
everyone they know. Logging onto to Facebook with endless updates of
smiley or sad faces, or posting acceptance letters on Instagram on a
daily basis has become a natural occurrence for high school seniors.
Naturally, students are extremely excited, as March symbolizes the accumulation of 14 years of back breaking schoolwork.
But
the other side of the process must be taken into account too, for every
success story, comes one with an opposite ending. Instead of elation, a
feeling of helpless dejection and second guessing.
Some
students openly boast about getting accepted to schools that their best
friends may have not gotten into, making what should be a joyous
occasion, into a rather awkward conundrum. Students ask themselves, “How
do I celebrate my achievements, without hurting the people around me?”
Which bears the question, should the college admission process be a bit more private?
Senior
Emily Cox, was recently informed that she didn’t get into Cal-Poly San
Luis Obispo, but all around her it seemed that her friends were getting
nothing but good news, “Getting
rejected from a college is a challenge within itself, especially when I
knew that my grades, SAT scores, and extracurricular activities greatly
out did some of the people that did get in, So yes, I was frustrated
that some of my friends got into Cal Poly when I didn't, but it must
mean that they either had something that I didn't, or their major wasn't
as impacted as mine. You never know with college admissions.”
Cox however, was adamant that she would never root against her friends, “I always root for my friends to get into their dream schools, regardless of whether or not I applied to the same ones”
In
the ideal world, everyone would get into the college of their choice,
but with the competition so fierce it has become impossible for everyone
to come out of the college admissions process happy, pitting friends
against friends.
Cox
said, “I was definitely upset that I didn’t get into Cal Poly San Luis
Obispo. I was frustrated that I was rejected and did not understand why I
was turned away, but I reminded myself that I have been accepted into
other great schools that see me as an individual, not just by my
transcript.”
Students should not lament on the schools they did not get into, but instead look for the good in the schools that do want them, because at the end of the day its easier to feel appreciative to those that see qualities they would want at their school, rather than being spiteful towards schools that don’t.
Langkusch leaves 20 year legacy
It
was 1993, and Bill Clinton was sworn in as our 42nd President,
succeeding George H. Bush. Six people were killed and 1000 people were
injured as the World Trade Center was bombed for the first time. The
Buffalo Bills lost their third straight Super Bowl, and Whitney Houston
was heard everywhere singing “I Will Always Love You.” It was two years
before Michelle Pfeiffer’s infamous portrayal of a teacher working at
Carlmont High School in the movie “Dangerous Minds.”
Amongst
all of this, in 1993, Gail Langkusch arrived at Carlmont High School as
an English teacher. She could not have known that she would remain at
Carlmont for 20 straight years. Over those two decades, upwards of 3,000
high school students would learn English from Langkusch, and she would
inspire and guide many many more.
When
Langkusch started at Carlmont in 1993, it was a much different place.
The school population consistently fluctuated between 1200 and 1400
students, the football field was grass, and the facilities Carlmont had
to offer couldn’t hold a candle to today’s.
Since
her arrival,Langkusch has strived to implement the same message in all
her students, Langkusch said, “I’d like all my students to leave here
knowing that they don’t have to agree with anyone, they can develop
their own world view, and whatever anyone else thinks doesn’t matter,
what they believe in is what matters.”
Carlmont
has had Langkusch for these twenty years, but she wasn’t always set on
the course of being a teacher. After majoring in Home Education and
getting a minor in English from San Jose State, Langkusch decided to be a
stay at home mom and raise her two children.
However,
following a divorce Langkusch decided that it was time for her to
pursue the profession of a teacher. She went back to school and got her
masters degree in English and her teaching credentials.
Since then Langkusch has enjoyed continued success teaching many classes, ranging from AP English to Drivers Education.
However,
it hasn’t always been smooth sailing during Langkusch’s tenure.
Langkusch said, “The biggest challenge has been dealing with the
government and how it has become more and more restrictive of the
teaching that goes on here.” She credits rigid state requirements and an
onslaught of standardized testing to the lowered morale of teachers
throughout the years.
Regardless of state regulations Langkusch has remained one of the most popular teachers on campus.
Junior
Pasha Minkovsky, who has Langkusch for AP English this year, credits
Langkusch’s popularity to her “free flowing, interesting, and engaging
teaching style,” and her ability to “connect with students outside of
the classroom.”
Langkusch
has also built a repertoire for the diversity of the content she
teaches,”I like that she teaches us about a plethora of issues and
debates going on around the world instead of just making us write essays
everyday,” said, junior, Josh Fagel.
Langkusch
has a wide variety of plans for her retirement, this summer she plans
to assist her daughter who is due to have twins. She also hopes to use
her Home Education degree to work with foster children.
Langkusch cannot work for the district for 6 months, but she plans on doing some substituting once and awhile here at Carlmont.
Traveling
is also on the agenda, as Langkusch has a long list of countries she
would like to visit when the opportunities arise.
On
June 6 of this year Gail Langkusch will teach her final English class
and retire after after 20 years as an educator at Carlmont High School.
When asked about what she will remember most about Carlmont Langkusch had this to say, “Teenagers are the best, the way they think, the way they approach things, the way they deal with life itself. What they think is funny, how they learn, and when they see that hall light turn on, that’s the best part of teaching here at Carlmont.”
Time out, or Burn out!
For
soon-to-be college freshman, what options are available to remedy the
crisis of academic burnout, overwhelming stress and the uneasy feeling
that maybe I’m just not ready to start college? For some, the solution
is found in taking a break called a “gap year.”
Deferring
college entrance for a year is a tradition that has been well
established in both Europe and Australia. In the United States the idea
of a gap year is just starting to catch on. American students are
beginning to realize the benefits of taking a year off before
shouldering more stress and the heavy workload of college.
High
school, for most students, is a tenuous, stress-ridden journey --- a
rat race amongst America’s youth, all striving for that coveted place in
the “right” college of their dreams.
Reports show that
the chase for prized admissions starts earlier and earlier in children’s
lives. Childhood is scripted for a hopeful future of “success” with
academic and extracurricular activities often based on the direction of
hired outside tutors, counselors, and consultants. Admissions to
selective pre-K, Kindergarten and grammar schools are proving to be
statistically more difficult to gain entrance to than Harvard.
Senior
Omeed Ansari commented, “Senior year is the cumulation of a lot of hard
work, but our final year of high school isn’t a cakewalk, college
admissions are stressful down to the wire, only then do people really
feel like they can relax.”
Continuous high levels of
pressure and stress at an early age are taking their toll. High school
students endure late nights often walking around in a fog of exhaustion
trying to focus on their required tasks or preparing for the next big
exam.
Sadly, some teens turn to binge drinking, drug
use, abuse of prescription psychiatric medication and other
self-destructive behaviors in an attempt to deal with their adult levels
of stress and uncertainty in their teenage years.
A
recent study reported in the New York Times reveals that, “The emotional
health of college freshmen, who feel buffeted by the recession and
stressed by the pressures of high school, has declined to the lowest
level since an annual survey of incoming students started collecting
data 25 years ago.”
After understanding what a gap year
was, Jordan Kiss, a junior, seemed enthused about embarking on one,
“I’d love to take a gap year, it would be awesome to have a year off and
just refocus for college.”
A gap year can be a time to
recharge between the life stages of high school and college. The goal is
to remove yourself from the regular routines and pressures of academic
life and engage in something completely different such as getting a job,
pursuing a personal passion of music or the arts, traveling, working,
volunteering, or living abroad.
Admission officers
from highly selective colleges including Harvard, Princeton, the
University of North Carolina and Middlebury have come out strongly in
favor of this approach, citing a year off as contributing significantly
to their students’ overall college success.
Bob
Clagett, a former director of admissions at Middlebury College, says
taking a gap year can help students gain a renewed focus on academics.
“By stepping off the treadmill, they frequently remind themselves of
what their education is all about,” he says. “They kind of reinvent
themselves.”
A Gap year does not have to be an expensive
year of travel and leisure, as long as it benefits the student in the
long run and extends their academic success.
Guide to the class of 2013 senior panel
Thursday night in a packed student union, students and parents
gathered to listen to a panel of graduating seniors who were chosen to
speak about how they personally got through the college admissions
process.
The 6 seniors were: Amir Abedrabbo (University of Santa Barbara California), Daniel Bereket (Stanford University), Laura Ong (Princeton University), Gianna Dimick (University of Santa Barbara California), Sydney Smith (University of Los Angles California), and Lauren Bruguera (Brown University).
The presentation began with Connie Dominguez, who is a guidance counselor at Carlmont, lauding all members of the panel for their hard work and dedication towards both academics and extra curriculars throughout their four years at Carlmont.
Dominguez also commented, "that this could be the last senior panel that follows the present format."
Dominguez then went on to ask the panel a series of questions specifically about the college admission process. These are some of the questions that Dominguez asked, and the answers that the panel gave.
Describe how you narrowed down your college search?
Daniel - "At first I was overwhelmed by the amount of colleges, and I knew there were a lot of colleges I had not looked into at all. I narrowed my search by using supermatch on Naviance, this matched me up with a large range of colleges that had what I was looking for. The easiest way to learn about colleges is word of mouth, just by talking to people, I was able to narrow down my search to a couple of schools."
Sydney - "I was able to narrow down my college search, by word of mouth and taking college tours. Taking college tours was really important to me, I felt this was the only way to completely know I liked a school."
Gianna - "I really was able to narrow down my college choices by looking for schools that met my requirements. At first a big factor for me was getting as far away from home as possible, with that in mind I really was interested in some schools on the east coast, like Boston University and Syracuse University. I also had a private counselor who helped me narrow down the schools that I was interested in."
Laura - "I was really interested schools that had the vibe which I was looking for; that was a school that was filled with people who were primarily focused on academics. Basically a school full of nerds! I felt like I'd be much more comfortable in an environment filled with the same people for me."
Amir - "I knew I wanted to stay in California, so I focused my search on mostly schools in California."
Can you share a strategy or mindset that helped you stay on top of the college process?
Amir - "I made a good list. A list is absolutely critical for the college admissions process, the list is what got me through the process. It helped me stay on top of the countless amount of deadlines and other important dates."
Daniel - "I know this is going to be tough for the juniors to hear, but the college admission process starts now. It is absolutely critical that you get ahead of the game and start your applications this summer. Junior year is definitely a burden, but so is first semester senior year. Its just as difficult and with all of these applications things can certainly begin to weigh you down. Thats why its so important to get a jump on things this summer so you can keep your workload at a manageable amount."
Laura - "I agree with Daniel! Get a jump on things this summer that way you can ensure that you put the best work into your applications! Also make sure that you do a lot of drafts for your essays, I did a ton of drafts and my final product was much different compared to when I started."
Gianna - "Again, start your applications this summer! I started mine in August and was able to not feel to overly overwhelmed during first semester. Its really important that you stand out on the essays, its the one way you can give these colleges an inside look on who you are as a person outside of school. Another lesson I quickly learned through the college admissions process is the amount of usernames and passwords you quickly accumulate. There are so many that you need to keep track of, I recommend that you make an address book that holds all of your usernames and passwords."
Lauren - "Regarding staying on top of the essay, I also started mine in the summer. At first I was having trouble coming up with what I wanted to say, I had so many thoughts swirling through my head and I really wanted to make sure that my essay really brought out who I was as a person. It was really difficult to narrow down what to write and at the same time ensure that I was presenting myself to colleges in a reputable way. I got over this by just writing what ever came to my head, and from this the essay writing went a lot smoother and I was able to successfully convey who I was as a person."
What kind of extracurriculars were you involved with outside of school?
Lauren - "I was involved in basically all kinds of preforming arts, I've been heavily involved in Carlmont choir and I also did the musical all 4 years here at Carlmont. Outside of school I dance at a dance studio which I've been doing for a long time. I also volunteer at the dance studio by basically helping out anyway that I can. I'm interested in the medical field so I volunteered also at the Sequoia hospital."
Sydney - "Basically my extracurricular outside of school is dance, I've been dancing since I was 2 years old and I've been practicing 5 hours a day ever since. Like Lauren, I volunteer at my studio and teach classes to younger kids. Last year as a junior I was accepted into Julliard, but I was looking for a school that had a balance between the arts and academics."
Gianna - "My main extracurricular revolved around journalism, I'm proud to have been involved in 24 editions of our newspaper the Carlmont Highlander. I've probably given close to 1000 hours to the newspaper as a photographer, staff writer, section editor and this year as editor in chief. Through journalism I've been presented with numerous awards for both my photography and my writing. But I also did other things around school, I was involved with numerous clubs and did water polo and swimming here at Carlmont."
Laura - "I did a lot of extracurriculars that revolved around the arts. I've been playing the piano since a young age and today I volunteer by helping kids learn how to play. I also am involved in choir here at Carlmont. Sophomore year I started a Philosophy club which I'm now the president of, it was cool to see the club grow each year."
Daniel - "I developed a love for music at a young age, so playing the trumpet makes up a huge portion of my extracurriculars. I play in a couple of prestigious groups that have traveled around the country. Sophomore year I discovered my love for running, at first I thought I was going to suck and it wasn't until my senior year that I really began to enjoy consistent success. This year after training hard all summer I was able to place 11th in the statewide cross country
meet and I'm racing in the state race for track this weekend. My involvement in running is a testament to the idea that you don't know how good or how much you'll enjoy something till you give it a try. So I advise all of you to continue to branch out and look for new opportunities because you'll never know what you might find. "
Amir - "I think the key to finding an extracurricular is finding something that you're passionate about, show the colleges that what you do with your free time is really meaningful and important to you. For me that was working on cars and playing soccer."
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Here is a summary of the main points that the panel presented:
The 6 seniors were: Amir Abedrabbo (University of Santa Barbara California), Daniel Bereket (Stanford University), Laura Ong (Princeton University), Gianna Dimick (University of Santa Barbara California), Sydney Smith (University of Los Angles California), and Lauren Bruguera (Brown University).
The presentation began with Connie Dominguez, who is a guidance counselor at Carlmont, lauding all members of the panel for their hard work and dedication towards both academics and extra curriculars throughout their four years at Carlmont.
Dominguez also commented, "that this could be the last senior panel that follows the present format."
Dominguez then went on to ask the panel a series of questions specifically about the college admission process. These are some of the questions that Dominguez asked, and the answers that the panel gave.
Describe how you narrowed down your college search?
Daniel - "At first I was overwhelmed by the amount of colleges, and I knew there were a lot of colleges I had not looked into at all. I narrowed my search by using supermatch on Naviance, this matched me up with a large range of colleges that had what I was looking for. The easiest way to learn about colleges is word of mouth, just by talking to people, I was able to narrow down my search to a couple of schools."
Sydney - "I was able to narrow down my college search, by word of mouth and taking college tours. Taking college tours was really important to me, I felt this was the only way to completely know I liked a school."
Gianna - "I really was able to narrow down my college choices by looking for schools that met my requirements. At first a big factor for me was getting as far away from home as possible, with that in mind I really was interested in some schools on the east coast, like Boston University and Syracuse University. I also had a private counselor who helped me narrow down the schools that I was interested in."
Laura - "I was really interested schools that had the vibe which I was looking for; that was a school that was filled with people who were primarily focused on academics. Basically a school full of nerds! I felt like I'd be much more comfortable in an environment filled with the same people for me."
Amir - "I knew I wanted to stay in California, so I focused my search on mostly schools in California."
Can you share a strategy or mindset that helped you stay on top of the college process?
Amir - "I made a good list. A list is absolutely critical for the college admissions process, the list is what got me through the process. It helped me stay on top of the countless amount of deadlines and other important dates."
Daniel - "I know this is going to be tough for the juniors to hear, but the college admission process starts now. It is absolutely critical that you get ahead of the game and start your applications this summer. Junior year is definitely a burden, but so is first semester senior year. Its just as difficult and with all of these applications things can certainly begin to weigh you down. Thats why its so important to get a jump on things this summer so you can keep your workload at a manageable amount."
Laura - "I agree with Daniel! Get a jump on things this summer that way you can ensure that you put the best work into your applications! Also make sure that you do a lot of drafts for your essays, I did a ton of drafts and my final product was much different compared to when I started."
Gianna - "Again, start your applications this summer! I started mine in August and was able to not feel to overly overwhelmed during first semester. Its really important that you stand out on the essays, its the one way you can give these colleges an inside look on who you are as a person outside of school. Another lesson I quickly learned through the college admissions process is the amount of usernames and passwords you quickly accumulate. There are so many that you need to keep track of, I recommend that you make an address book that holds all of your usernames and passwords."
Lauren - "Regarding staying on top of the essay, I also started mine in the summer. At first I was having trouble coming up with what I wanted to say, I had so many thoughts swirling through my head and I really wanted to make sure that my essay really brought out who I was as a person. It was really difficult to narrow down what to write and at the same time ensure that I was presenting myself to colleges in a reputable way. I got over this by just writing what ever came to my head, and from this the essay writing went a lot smoother and I was able to successfully convey who I was as a person."
What kind of extracurriculars were you involved with outside of school?
Lauren - "I was involved in basically all kinds of preforming arts, I've been heavily involved in Carlmont choir and I also did the musical all 4 years here at Carlmont. Outside of school I dance at a dance studio which I've been doing for a long time. I also volunteer at the dance studio by basically helping out anyway that I can. I'm interested in the medical field so I volunteered also at the Sequoia hospital."
Sydney - "Basically my extracurricular outside of school is dance, I've been dancing since I was 2 years old and I've been practicing 5 hours a day ever since. Like Lauren, I volunteer at my studio and teach classes to younger kids. Last year as a junior I was accepted into Julliard, but I was looking for a school that had a balance between the arts and academics."
Gianna - "My main extracurricular revolved around journalism, I'm proud to have been involved in 24 editions of our newspaper the Carlmont Highlander. I've probably given close to 1000 hours to the newspaper as a photographer, staff writer, section editor and this year as editor in chief. Through journalism I've been presented with numerous awards for both my photography and my writing. But I also did other things around school, I was involved with numerous clubs and did water polo and swimming here at Carlmont."
Laura - "I did a lot of extracurriculars that revolved around the arts. I've been playing the piano since a young age and today I volunteer by helping kids learn how to play. I also am involved in choir here at Carlmont. Sophomore year I started a Philosophy club which I'm now the president of, it was cool to see the club grow each year."
Daniel - "I developed a love for music at a young age, so playing the trumpet makes up a huge portion of my extracurriculars. I play in a couple of prestigious groups that have traveled around the country. Sophomore year I discovered my love for running, at first I thought I was going to suck and it wasn't until my senior year that I really began to enjoy consistent success. This year after training hard all summer I was able to place 11th in the statewide cross country
meet and I'm racing in the state race for track this weekend. My involvement in running is a testament to the idea that you don't know how good or how much you'll enjoy something till you give it a try. So I advise all of you to continue to branch out and look for new opportunities because you'll never know what you might find. "
Amir - "I think the key to finding an extracurricular is finding something that you're passionate about, show the colleges that what you do with your free time is really meaningful and important to you. For me that was working on cars and playing soccer."
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Here is a summary of the main points that the panel presented:
- Do self reflections, figure out what kind of person you want the colleges to perceve you as.
- Submit your applications early! Don't leave it to the last moment, you have no idea what kind of tech problems you could run into on the day of!
- Be genuine about your accomplishments, colleges do random audits to make sure what you're telling them is true. You don't want to be that person that gets caught lying on an application!
- Senior year is HARD. Don't leave your essays for the fall, get a head start during the summer so you're not stressed out in the fall.
- Visit colleges, there are a ton of things that colleges can't convey to perspective students on their website. Before choosing a college make sure that you've traveled there in the flesh, that way you get a first hand encounter with the place you'll be spending the next 4 years of your life.
- Colleges are looking for genuine people with genuine interests, don't present yourself as somebody your not, because in the long run, colleges are going to want you at their school for who you really are, not some phony persona.
- ESSAYS MATTER A LOT, don't blow them off! This is your chance to show the colleges who you really are!
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